Bad. Rusty has his own ritual before he plays with us. Lincoln: NOOOOOOOOOOO!!! I'm calling the cops! [Later, Lincoln and his family were sitting in the living room when the doorbell rang. ", Mascot:[in a familiar voice] "Hey, man! LYNN LOUD HITS A GRAND SLAM!!! ", Lincoln: (nervously) "Well, there is this new Ace Savvy movie that just came out, but I know none of you like Ace Savvy like I do. Ever again. [Normal - Remake - Original - Alternate Ending] 11 Louds a Leapin' Intern for the Worse / The Old and the Restless. Lincoln: Throughout my life, ive been teased, laughed at, kicked out of rooms, blamed, grounded for petty reasons and done so many humiliating deeds for all of you! (They pile into Vanzilla and go searching for him). This whole trip their parents were telling them to behave and they got grounded when they didn't, but now they're learning that they did something to cause them to be kicked out of the hotel after only one day. It's been a day since Lincoln tried to convinced them that he wasn't bad luck. Hearing their son shout at them like this, both mad and sad at them, broke their hearts. Lincoln: Alright, i admit! Angus: (surprised by the question) Oh my. We don't need to get violent here. Luan: We're sorry we sold all your stuff! "Hotel security came up to the room?!" Give it back! ", Lincoln:[to the viewers] "Maybe I can move into Lisa's fallout shelter. Lynn pitches and the opposing batter hits the ball right back her, knocking her socks, shoes, and hat off and making her spin in mid-air before landing on the ground. Also, any negative comments or comments suggesting that I'm trying to paint the siblings in a bad light will be deleted and I will block you. Meatbrain here and her dumb softball, this never would have happened! Luna spots Lincoln). How can I help you?" I need a very big, long rest from them. I got to find somewhere to hide! I don't even care about that anymore. I don't expect it to be good, I just felt like doing an alternative ending. "Listen to what?" Lucy: "He's actually doing pretty good." Lynn: [nerviously] "Yeah, decent enough. ", Lincoln: "Because your my sister." He leaps onto Lynn in a fight cloud, the two yell and shout over hits, kicks, punches, bites and headbutts. ", Lincoln: "Well Luna, we all make mistakes. While eating breakfast, Lincoln learns from his sisters that they have planned activities later in the day. We were given the room." #The loud house #lincoln loud #lori loud #leni loud #luna loud #Luan Loud #Lynn Loud #Lucy Loud #lana loud #lola loud #lisa loud #lily loud #the loud house headcanons #the loud . (Lincoln is sitting on the back porch while his family is at the game, looking pretty mad. He staggers inside, weak and collapsed. ", Luna: (with a sad look on her face) "No. Lincoln: FIIIIIIIIIIIIIIINNNNNNNNEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Theres no need to shout. it is true that the Duke's actions were noble and his heart was stout, but he held doubts of his. Upload stories, poems, character descriptions & more. She told the kids that their parents caused them to get kicked out, she told them what they did and, in a sense, she was responsible for the kids' destructive rampage. (Meanwhile, back on the beach, the family has gathered together, feeling very ashamed and humiliated. I have failed as a human being. Find out what other deviants think - about anything at all. We let superstitions get to us, and we did something no family should ever do. Lincoln asked his parents. Lynn Sr. asked. Lynn Sr. and Rita were not happy to hear that, but knew that arguing with their kids would be pointless. Hey guys, I'm sorry I was so horrible. What if one of the neighbours saw Lincoln when he was sleeping outside and called the police? Lincoln: Which is why Im making you all wear squirrel suits for the rest of your lives, [They all gulp. I thought you were my family! Its a stupid mascot costume! YOU'RE BANNED! Keep on writing fics like this! [The crowd cheers, the Loud family gasps in shock] Lynn: "No! (Lincoln throws Lynn into the rest of the family, with a massive, bowling-sounding crash. Rita: Lincoln?! A Happy Ending New Reading List. The family and Bobby are there to support Lynn. After spending a good 10-15 minutes unpacking and putting everything back in the respective places in their rooms, the siblings walked into the living room and saw their parents were in fact still sitting on the couch. (The employee obliges, and the police arrive to arrest Lincoln, just as the rest of the Louds arrive.). (He gathers up a sleeping bag, pillow and snacks. There's a massive storm heading your way." So about the Duke, Had he ever felt like he was just a glorified peasant in his time around is ten sisters? Lincoln: So where did this looney belief that i was bad luck suddenly come from, huh!? SO I DEMAND AN EXPLANATION!" (They smile, Rita comes over to hug him and rest of them except Lynnjoin in for a group hug. "Okay," the woman says, "Surprisingly enough, it wasn't something those kids did." Literature. Luna: [Blushes] Really? We know we don't deserve it, but we hope you can forgive us! (Tears up) Our only bro. i certainly didn't expect something like that, but i guess curiosity must be fed. But this particular day, one of those children has been left out due to some "bad luck". I wonder if the windows are locked?" ", Sisters (sans Lynn, with sad looks on their faces): "No. Sam: Luna, I got your letter. We're supposed to be here until tomorrow. Rita: Okay Lincoln! Can you check on the computer and see who's staying in this room." Inspiration for this fanfiction comes from few positive predictions for No Such Luck. SQUIRRELS WIN! "Get in here, now!," the man yelled, scaring the girl and making her run into the room like her butt was on fire. Except now I have to deal with the most annoying teasing that's ever existed. "Wait, what are you saying?" Start talking. Lincoln and Lucy were dealing with a fictional ghost. Upload your creations for people to see, favourite, and share. White hair extended ending9. I am an 11 year old boy, not some object to be pushed away and than used! Instead he found comfort in being hugged by Leni, glaring at her parents as she did so. Maybe I should just stop playing softball for a while. I loved winning so much that didn't take my failure like a good sport, and started thiswhole bycalling you bad luck. Let's go! We get it. I know remaking this episode has been done to death, so this is probably the only alternate ending I'm going to do for this episode. Any bad luck? I can't believe I just hit one of my own sisters! "SAVE IT, RITA!" Well just grin and bear it. But Lynn Jr. yelled, "SIT DOWN!" "She's got a million cats that enjoy scratching us like crazy," Lucy said. I can't even begin to imagine what they'll do their parents when they find them.'. ), Lynn: (Screams in despair) ROASTED, BEATEN, VERBALLY THRASHED AND TOSSED INTO THE SEA BY MY ONLY BROTHER!!!! (she comes down into the living room and whistles loudly) FAMILY, DOWN HERE NOW!!! the family opens the door to see a ticked off Lincoln. Lola: If it wasn't for Miss. I HATE THIS!!! Fool Me Twice extended ending10. "What we're saying is is that you two are going to be confided to this building for the next 2 calendar cycles, only to leave for employment reasons or to get us sustenance from the one of our beloved stores." My last one just got messed up and i wish to make one properly. Honest! Goodbye for now. I hate that fact that you never make up for anything! After a few seconds, the same pounding noise was heard yet again, this time even louder. I plan to do some more humorous parodies and some other stories that aren't going to be as serious as this one, so be on the lookout for that. ", Lincoln: "Well what are we standing here for? When my so-called 'family' gets home, I'm gonna have a talk with them." And we're sorry, but it's been so long since your father and I had time, real time, to ourselves and I guess we got carried away." Share your thoughts, experiences, and stories behind the art. (closes the door to the room) Lincoln: Okay then. ", Lola: "Don't try to fool us! (Lynn stops) "I forgive you. Perhaps i was wrong to fall for such a deception, even for my age group. Lynn Sr.: Look, son, families will have bad days every now and than. "WELL, NOW THAT I KNOW HOW YOU KIDS FEEL ABOUT ME! Once they fell asleep, they no longer had any bad dreams that night. ", Pep:[dully] "Oh, I have that effect on people. ", "Can I just say that I was only out there because I was accidentally locked out." I hate boring science lectures! (facepalms. Leni: Like, I don't like it here anymore either! Lori soon pulled out her phone and dialed Aunt Ruth's number. ", Baseball Announcer: "The windup, the pitch. He then grabs one of the sofa cushions and screams all his frustration into it.). ", Lynn: (angered, she gets closer to Lincoln and raises a fist at him) "If you don't get out of here, I'm gonna-", Luna: (pull Lynn back) "WHOA! CircularBoat742 19 March 2017 User blog:CircularBoat742. You can't ground us, we're the parents!" I'M A STUPID, SENSELESS BULLY!!! We had no idea this family could be so gullible. We need it! ", Lincoln: (to Leni) "Leni, all those times I went to the Mall with you to pick out clothes, anything bad happen those times? I hate that you made me feel like an outcast! They were upset and disappointed, their kids promised them they wouldn't cause any problems but they did. kamenrider. lincoln. # 17. the loud kamen rider by Dratinibro. I cant take a moment more of this! Things were starting to get intense in the Loud family hotel room. Just a head's up. Lincoln: (points to the window) "The window. Lori: WE'RE THE WORST SISTERS EVER!!!! ], Baseball Announcer: "It's goingit's goingIT'S GONE!!! They also saw Lori in the front seat, Lynn Sr. knocked on the window. Eventually Lincoln had the courage to say something, but was stuttering as he did so, "Areare you saying" he wanted to finished that sentence but felt that he couldn't. You're all delusional and irresponsible all the time and I HATE that! He even then flips over and smashes the trophy case. With that, the parents just held each other for the remainder of the night, promising to do whatever it took to earn back their children's trust. Luck. Luan then walked up to Leni and whispered into her ear. (With his remaining strength, he scrambles over to the house. I can't let those crazy beasts see me! (Raises his fist at her). Lynn ran outside and falcon punched him. Head Poet's Anxiety alt scene12. That answer definitely caused this man's brain to get straight to work. Lynn and Lana were accidentally destroying the hotel shower. "YOU KIDS ARE NOTHING BUT TROUBLE AND TO BE HONEST, I WAS GLAD WHEN YOUR PARENTS DECIDED TO TAKE YOU TO THAT HOTEL BECAUSE I COULDN'T STAND THE THOUGHT OF BEING STUCK WITH YOU MONSTERS FOR TWO DAYS!" Ive covered for you guys, ive done you all favours, ive gotten you out of trouble, ive spent time with you and this is how you all repay me!?!? One of the Boys alt ending4. They knew they not only had the bill from the hotel to worry about, but also the possibility of getting sued. Lincoln returns the hug, rubbing her back), Lynn: "No, it'sNOT okay! We should thought about it ourselves before jumping to a preposterous conclusion that you were bad luck. *Sniff* I thought he liked our things! (He tears the costume off, leaving a very red and sweat-coated body in his wake. Lincoln blushed and hugged Ronnie Anne. Lynn: (sighs) Who am I kidding? Rita got up from her seat and said, "Kids, let me explain" "Explain what?!" (The family submerge, coughing up water, covered in seaweed and muck, their sunnies, hats and sandals floating in the water and their swimsuits in tatters. "Lincoln," Rita said, about to get up from the couch to comfort him. Her son said, "You and dad told us to behave ourselves and grounded us when we didn't, which we understand, but the fact that you said all that and decided your own advice was pointless! Why do these three buffoons have the room. Since the room is occupied, it should've shown up as that in the computer database. ", (and that did it. He'll ruin it for them!" Rita: "Even worse than they already were!" Chester: "OK, if you know the words to this song, sing along!" [Lincoln starts song off with turntables and keyboards.] Rita asked. We feel so ashamed!" Rita: (with a broken voice) "We're so sorry Lincoln! No pun intended. I hope you enjoy, please try to be as gentle yet honest as possible as to what you think about the story (this is my first fanfiction in general). After half an hour, Lincoln begins to sweat like crazy and lose his mind. ", [It's revealed to be Lincoln in the runabout costume], Lincoln:[to the viewers] "My plan is simple: I watch the game in disguise, and when the Squirrels win, everyone will see I'm not bad luck. Opening the door slightly, Luna stuck her head out and saw a man, somewhere in his early 30's with Caucasian skin and short brown hair, wearing a security uniform. They were thinking that they should've told their kids no and that they were going to stay at Aunt Ruth's for the weekend. Lucy: Come on Fangs, we've got some repaying to do for Lincoln. He even throws many of his family's items out the windows, such as Luna's guitar, Luan's comedy props, Lisa's science set, Lori's phone, Leni's sewing machine and dresses, Rita's typing machine, Lynn Sr's cowbell, Lana's animal shelters, Lola's cosmetics and tiaras, Lucy's poetry book and coffin, the TV and most of Lynn's sports equipment. I tried to make it as comical as i could. You tricked us in the first place. I WISH YOU'D NEVER EXISTED!!!!! She was bringing Lincoln her Valentines day card.] Did anything bad ever happen at your concerts with me there? (She storms out of his room and into the hallway. 'What did he mean there's a massive storm heading her way?' Status Update. It's too broken, even for me! The squirrel mascot is dancing a little less energetic than usual. Lincoln: Lana. Putting the phone on speaker, they waited for her to pick up the phone. Lincoln Loud, the middle child of the family, was brought to his older sister's baseball league from his own will. NOTHING!! Did anything life threatening happen? I demand an explanation! Lincoln turned to Lori and said, "I think we should call Aunt Ruth and tell her how we feel." You don't care about me, you think I'm nothing, but a thing, you care about no one, but yourselves, you never wanted a boy, you don't have feelings, you all feel NOTHING ANYMORE!!! So, I plan to rectify that. Almost as good as any Ace Savvy convention. Why did you kick me out of the house? Lana: YOU DON'T WANT TO BE OUR BROTHER ANYMORE AND IT'S ALL OUR FAULT!!!! I'm not bad luck. I heard you scream! Luna: I dont know. He had a glare on his face and he was tapping his foot on the ground repetitively, showing that he was serious. Hearing that made the parents sigh in disappointment, they should've known their kids would break things and hoped the bill wouldn't be that much, but also knew that odds were that the bill was going to be massive. Rita: Sweetie, please! Are you no longer grounded to the room?" Lucy: But..but you wanted us to believe it. We don't know what we were thinking! Leni: Linky.(sniffles).please don't do this to us. Lynn Sr.: Son..we never stopped loving you..we do care about you Lori: Don't hurt us like this..we're your familywe want you to be with us. Lana: We didn't mean to ruin your life..(sniffles).we just wanted to avoid bad luck..we're so sorry we went about it all wrong Luna: We get it bro.you were never bad luck..we ruined everything for youthere is no such thing as luckwe'll never live this down.. Lola: You can't hurt your own family like this.. Lincoln: You all hurt me first! (He walks back and forth to get attention) You guys have spent the whole weekend obsessing over this ridiculous good luck/bad luck thing at my expense! Lynn: Well, its because of that costume that i won my last game! YOU'LL BE HAPPY TO KNOW YOU WON'T HAVE TO WORRY ABOUT DEALING WITH ME OR MY CATS OR MY DISGUSTING PUDDING OR MY BUNIONS ANYMORE! Lincoln said, as tears started forming in his eyes. No Such Luck part 2. Lincoln and Lucy hung their heads in shame and embarrassment. Ruth said, curious to where this was going. Lynn Sr.: KIDS, please! OUR PRECIOUS TROPHIES! Anyway, here's my fanfiction. Incredible from The Incredibles on the cover. ", Lynn: (smiles, more tears come down her eyes,) "What did I do to deserve a brother like you?" You overreact to everything! Lucy. I hate presentations! I hate that you don't love me anymore! Lincoln: Enjoy your life in suits! "Is that so?" Those were the last words Ruth spoke to the Loud family before hanging up. (he goes to the living room window. She hoped the kids would say something, but all they got were grunts of disbelief. Our family wouldn't be a family without-. Lincoln: But you were all so gullible and stupid! He's a big fan of you, Lincoln; and he told me that you're working with news. Lola finished with. Lynn Sr. stuttered for a few moments and said, "Ground us?! ", Lynn Sr.: (with a broken voice) "And we were horrible parents to you, locking you out! Rita: I guess this is what we get for selling all his stuff. Lola: (sniffles) He called us all dummies.and a waste of life. Luan: (starts to cry) He also called us monsters..that we don't care for anyone, but ourselves.. Lana: He did have a point. ", Lisa: (with a broken voice, but not as loud): "Even an intelligence person such as myselffell for such bologna. "Huh. Knowing they sealed the deal and there's no way they will ever have to go back to Aunt Ruth's, Lincoln said, "Well so long, freakshow. "EXCUSE ME???!!!" Lynn Sr. and Rita wanted to say something, but saw the glares on their kids' faces and knew that they wouldn't get anywhere arguing. Wow, Lincoln, I'm really sorry. @JackLeighton19 Idea on How to End This Story: Employee: (Grunts) That's it! "Yes, you are right," the woman said, "It appears that your parents were caught swimming in the pool after hours." I can take being kicked out of family activities and being locked out of my room, butbeing locked out of my own home?! Everyone in the room went silent, stood still, afraid to make a move or a noise. Lucy: So, that's it then? Summary: Taken from the episode 'No Such Luck'. loud. Lynn Sr: We promise to never do it again! I've gotten complaints of loud noises, stuff breaking and a possible brawl breaking out in one hotel room. The siblings glared at her for a moment but saw she had a point, it didn't make sense to ground her or Lily for that matter, she was a baby, anything she did wasn't entirely her fault. ", Lincoln: "No, Lucy. They knew that whatever they were going to tell Aunt Ruth, it wasn't going to be good. "WE HATE THOSE STUPID CATS OF YOURS!" This Fanfic is a MASSIVE critique on every fanfic that is targeting the Episode "No Such Luck" of the Western Animation Series "The Loud House." No Such Luck Alternate ending (Bad) Deviation Actions. ", Lola: (with a sad look on her face) "No. "Yeah Felix," she said, concerned hearing the pain in his voice, "What's wrong?" Lynn: FINE! Patching Things Up / Cheater by the Dozen. Theres no need for such vile, hateful behaviour, elder brother! "Her pudding is at least a hundred years old and will cause us all to go to the hospital for stomach pumping," Lisa added. Although it does teach us a good moral about it not being an easy road (but its worth it), some of the stuff involved does feel a bit out of place (like the disowning part by Ruth). [shows the score: Hazeltuck Lions: 3, Royal Woods Squirrels: nothing.] Lynn: Stop being such a baby and just put that suit back on! Share your thoughts, experiences, and stories behind the art. Lisa: That's the last time I ever fall for such phone-baloney! Ruthless People extended ending13. After he said that, he finally saw his kids' faces and immediately started backing away, but the kids stomped forward, towards him and Rita and they completely surrounded them. We don't want to stare at you on the drive home, so you're sitting in the back." No one said anything, not the siblings, not the obnoxious guys, not Felix, not the woman on the other end, just silence. The minute after those words left Luna's lips, the security officer leaned his face in front of Luna's and responded with, "You can help me by letting me into your room. The way she said 'Don't Move,' made Lynn Sr. and Rita flinch in fright, they knew from Lori's tone that she dead serious so they knew better than to disobey, it worked all the time they did so it should work when she did it. Luna, Luan, Lola and Lisa were battling off against three obnoxious hotel guests that made all of them look like saints. I'm not. Most of the fanfictions involve Lynn being more unlikeable, they contain Luna and Leni feeling sympathy over Lincoln because the fanbase is mostly biased between the relationships between Lincoln and Luna and Leni and the fanfictions don't even fix the episodes . And then, as quickly as it appeared, the noises disappeared. Luna: (with a broken voice) "We're really sorry bro! "AND WE ESPECIALLY HATE HAVING TO LOOK AT THOSE BUNION INFESTED FEET OF YOURS! Leni: (sniffles) I miss him so bad. Lynn Sr.: He wrecked our trophy case to!? "And don't even get us started on the chores she makes us do," Lincoln shouted, "Especially buffing her bunions." "No need," another voice was heard saying, everyone turned and saw Jeffrey, the spa manager standing in the doorway, glaring at all of them, "I got staff to pack all of your stuff into your bags and bring it downstairs when I was informed you were still here by Maddie, one of my front desk clerks." I'll never be able to play games the best way again! Ive been a really nice guy with you for far too long! "WE HATE YOUR DISGUSTING PUDDING!" (The family screams in horror. Ruth yelled, "I DON'T WANT YOU OR YOUR UNGRATEFUL BRATS OR YOUR MANCHILD HUSBAND ANYWHERE NEAR MY HOUSE AGAIN? (to the viewers) "Now if you'll excuse me, I'm gonna have some fun with my family." (continues to cry. (Tugs at it), (They tug and pull while the rest of the family backs away nervously). She then added, "I was just talking to my boyfriend when suddenly the sliding door closes and I can't get back in. Find out what other deviants think - about anything at all. [The softball playoffs. Lincoln and the parents come up.]. ", Lincoln: "You know what, Lynn. Post-Story Notice: Anyway. I hate that you sold my bed and everything I had! I let my pride get the best to me! ", Rita: (with a broken voice) "We're so sorry Lincoln! WE MAKE EVERYTHING WORSE!!! Lynn and Lana were accidentally destroying the hotel shower. Lincoln: I admit, it was stupid of me to drag that lie on, but while i learn an important lesson not to be a fibber more than i needed, what do you numbnuts learn!? "What," Felix said, "what is it?" Like Lynn Sr. said, it wasn't an easy road and there were times when they were ready to give up, but they didn't and, as a result, their kids forgave them for their actions, more or less. (heads to Vanzilla and gets inside, they drive of to the movies). (They enter the house, but Lincoln is nowhere to be seen.). Ive come to many grave-digging events and cemeteries with you! Baby Steps / Brawl in the Family. The furniture was all over the place, the shower was ruined, the air conditioner was gone and he noticed a 17-year old girl with blonde hair in a blue shirt outside, about to jump from the side of the balcony. "Wait," Lori interrupted with, "How could our parents get us kicked out just for taking a late night dip?" They messed up and their children were furious with them because of it. Lincoln: yeah. I dont want to support you psychos! What kind of parents would do that? Those honors go to Nickelodeon, Teletoon, Chris Savino, Stephen Hillenberg, John A. Davis, Louis Sachar and Gold Cartoonist (who is located on fanfiction). ", Pep:[downright bored] "I think I've wasted my life. She said, in an angry tone, before blowing a raspberry her parents, covering them in her spit. I would feel awful if you did. NOTE: I apologise to those who hate NSL fics, but ive really wanted to get this off my chest. I hate it that you don't have any feelings or care anymore! Leni asked, an eyebrow raised, confused. Unfortunately, the reason behind the ground shaking presented itself. EVER!! "As grateful as I am that I saved you from making a dangerous decision," the man said, his tone getting lighter for a moment before returning to a serious tone, "I'm afraid that doesn't do much to the amount of trouble you're all in.". If you didn't show up, I don't want to think about what would've happened." I have truly failed the term 'scientist'. Lincoln, you are now free to come back into the house.". As she pondered what he meant, she felt the room shake. I hate gator wrestling! An alternate ending to Underratedheros story, "Requiem For A Loud". Share your thoughts, experiences and the tales behind the art. I was horrible to you! She pointed to the back row of seats. You're nothing, but an embarrassment to sports. We didn't find any though." And with that the family walked out of the spa, the kids still angry and upset and the parents ashamed and disappointed in themselves. They suddenly feel saddened, guilty, broken and worried. (She hugs Lincoln again), Lincoln: "Thanks Lynn. I hate golf! Everything is going wrong with the Squirrels today. You think you can just say sorry after making me look like a freak and everything will be fine!?! Ruth shouted back, insulted. I do it almost everyday, and it'snot that I hate going to them or don't want to support you, butsometimes, I wanted to take a break form all that, you know,unwind.
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